A Moment in Time

Posted: Saturday, December 09, 2006 by Travis Cody in
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Well gang - it's finally happened. Something has made it through this writer's block.

At This Moment

At this moment I am alive
Her smile brings respite
From the long lonely night

At this moment I am warm
Her touch deepening the love
Reflected in my eyes

At this moment I am free
As our passions quicken
Entwined in a charmed embrace

At this moment I am joy
As the sum of our love ignites
Like fire on arid grass

At this moment I am tranquil
Bathed in the afterglow
Of life, warmth, freedom, and joy

At this moment I am serene
Safe in the sweet tender mercy
Of a timeless love


Not likely to shake the earth, but new words nonetheless.

14 comments:

  1. Lee Ann aka Dixie says:
    09 December, 2006 18:05

    *stands up clapping and shouting* BRAVO!! BRAVO!! BRAVO!!

    You did it Trav, you did it! Beautifully written!

  1. Anonymous says:
    09 December, 2006 19:30

    Travis,

    To read such beautiful words of love for your dear one, and to know it broke such a barrier is truly a wonderful thing. To see the words flow gives me great happiness, you deserve to be able to have them seen. Inspired words always shake the earth, be proud of them. Many congratulations, my friend!!

    Tina

  1. Julie says:
    09 December, 2006 20:54

    Knowing that love found you and that you found some thoughts .... hmmmm which pleases me more? Let me think.

    Hugs Honey!!

  1. I blinded you with Science! says:
    09 December, 2006 22:37

    I'm happy the block is gone. The words are wonderful and show that true heart of yours.

  1. Coco says:
    09 December, 2006 23:09

    Hey Travis, glad the wall has tumbled, and for such a worthy cause ...

  1. TopChamp says:
    10 December, 2006 00:17

    Hello - Congrats on the unblocking (whatever brought it on?!)... and on the receipt of the new laptop.

    Good week for Travis then! Hope you also have a great weekend.

  1. Meribah says:
    10 December, 2006 07:15

    Beautiful poem there, Trav. Is it possible your old computer was the source of your writer's block? It's so hard to be productive when your tools are substandard! LOL By the way, congrats on the new computer!

  1. Anonymous says:
    10 December, 2006 08:02

    Thanks for the support gang. I don't know if the block is completely defeated, but I'm encouraged by this first little break through.

  1. Unknown says:
    10 December, 2006 12:08

    Oh Trav, that's beautiful.

  1. Joely Sue Burkhart says:
    10 December, 2006 13:01

    Great!! I don't exactly have writer's block, just a lack of time to write. I'm already down to 6 hours of sleep. I wonder if I can make do with 5? *wg*

  1. Anndi says:
    11 December, 2006 19:40

    Beautiful...it's good to see this Trav.. renews my faith..

    Thank her for me...

  1. Liz Hill says:
    12 December, 2006 10:02

    Wonderful Trav--so good--made me feel all warm.

    Good job buddy

    Pam is one lucky lucky gal

    Smooches

  1. Vinny "Bond" Marini says:
    12 December, 2006 10:02

    Trav
    great words my friend.. you love for her shows through in bright shining lights

  1. Angell says:
    13 December, 2006 09:37

    Trav!

    It's wonderful!!!! Congrats on having a breakthrough!!!

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